... one appears to be less aware of how to use paragraphs although the essay is laid out in paragraph form as most of the paragraphs consist of only one sentence. Ideas are not developed and the essay lacks cohesion. Linguistic style of the student gave an impression that the student's understanding of the topic is somewhat disjointed. In terms of content, this student addresses some of the question but does not develop her argument in any detail. The student identifies relevant information in the teaching materials but seems unsure of how to use it. Sentences such as 'There is also self sufficiency with the cows producing milk and possibly meat' do not relate to the general thread of the essay. There is also no proper referenced examples from academic reading or research findings given. Few technical terms are used and where they are used as in the sentence, 'The genra ...

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